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A Light at the End of the Road

“Alright, so there’s this black chick, right. She’s sitting on the floor, crying her brains out while I’m standing there trying to think. I tell her to shut up, several times, but she just keeps going on and on, non-stop. Then, all of a sudden she starts reachin' over the counter for something. "Something"…right, we all know what that “something” is, eh. Anyways, I tell her to stop moving, nicely, but she keeps reaching over, ignoring every word I say. So, next I pull my gun and point it straight at her, but guess what? She just keeps going for it. So I’m thinking, does she think I’m stupid or something? I start to yell, she starts to cry eve

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A Light at the End of the Road“Alright, so there’s this black chick, right. She’s sitting on the floor, crying her brains out while I’m standing there trying to think. I tell her to shut up, several times, but she just keeps going on and on, non-stop. Then, all of a sudden she starts reachin' over the counter for something. "Something"…right, we all know what that “something” is, eh. Anyways, I tell her to stop moving, nicely, but she keeps reaching over, ignoring every word I say. So, next I pull my gun and point it straight at her, but guess what? She just keeps going for it. So I’m thinking, does she think I’m stupid or something? I start to yell, she starts to cry eve A Light at the End of the Road
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Current Residence: Ask me, and I might just tell you
Interests: Watching movies, writing stories
Favourite movie: Princess Mononoke, Pulp Fiction, Laputa, Jackie Brown, Grave of the Fireflies, Reservoir Dogs, etc..
Favourite band or musician: Whatever inspires me, except rap...kinda grew up to hate that stuff, sry :)
Favourite genre of music: Anything but rap
Favourite artist: Hayao Miyazaki
Favourite poet or writer: no idea
Favourite photographer: don't know any names
Favourite style of art: Anime
Operating System: Windows XP
MP3 player of choice: Winamp
Shell of choice: dunno
Wallpaper of choice: tons
Skin of choice: dunno
Favourite game: FF7
Personal Quote: Imagination is more important than Knowledge
Tools of the Trade: I got my imagination, and I don't need anything more

MSN: tournamentrules@hotmail.com

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~green-eyes-1-618 Aug 18, 2004, 7:50:01 AM

i finished "another trefoil" i had to leave suddenly so i couldn't finish it... go, read, comment

~RiverStar Aug 14, 2004, 11:48:58 AM

Since you asked me to, I'm gonna go through your writing (Thank god there's only three, lol) and see what I can do to help you along. And I'm actually going to print it out and make little notes. It's so much easier than doing it online and having to remember all that I read, not to mention it's easier on my eyes

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~silversilence0 Aug 8, 2004, 7:51:40 PM

first I'll say welcome to DA if you need help just feel free to ask anyone!
oh and to do links all you have to do is copy the URL and then past it in the thaught box, pretty easy huh? I got confused with that for a few months!
I really liked your story, you have a lot of tallent for story writing, I look forward to reading more